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Wednesday, 14 September 2016

My story

There was a boy called Jake. He was waiting for the bus.Then he went inside the bus. The bus driver fell asleep at the wheel.The bus crashed into the bank.Jake rang the firefighter got the holes got fixed by the firefighter and jake said tank you.
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6 comments:

  1. Jadyn Harrison19 September 2016 at 10:45

    hi jordan i like your picture because you have used alot of detail and it is very informative

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  2. Anahere @ Pt England School20 September 2016 at 09:29

    hi jordan i love your story and your picture keep up your amazing work

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  3. Angelica20 September 2016 at 10:17

    Hi Jordan I like your drawing it looks so cool

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  4. Angelica20 September 2016 at 10:19

    Hi Jordan I like your drawing it looks so cool

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  5. Muba21 September 2016 at 09:28

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  6. Muba21 September 2016 at 09:41

    Hi Jordan I am a year 7 student and i really like your drawing and story. You really have a lot of detail in your photo. keep up the good work.

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