Wednesday, 21 September 2016

My story

One fine day there was a girl named Rosie. Rosie went to the  skatepark to do some tricks. Crash! Rosie fell over and hurt her arm . She started to cry. A boy came to help. He had a phone. He rang 111. He asked for an ambulance. It came fast.


  1. Hi Jordan, I love your picture and your paragraph. Your punctuation was really good. Keep up the awesome work.

  2. hi Jordan

    i love the way you did the picture and you are a alsome drawer and your the best drawer in the school by