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Monday 20 April 2020

Goldilocks and the three bears



Once upon a time there lived three kind bears and one hungry yellow haired named Goldilocks.





The three bears wanted to go for a walk and pick some things up on the way so they did. When they just got outside they had locked the door so that no one would come in. Once they left. Then Goldilocks came and tried to get inside but luckily they locked the door.





Goldilocks really wanted to go in because she could smell delicious porridge.





Goldilocks was trying so hard to get in until she saw the window opened. So she climbed through it and saw her pot of gold. Her pot of gold was the porridge. First she tried daddy bears one it was too hot, then she tried mummy bears one it was too cold, then she tried baby bears one and it was just right.





When Goldilocks went To the living room she saw some comfy chairs. When she tried all of the chairs her favourite one was a baby bears chair. But something happened. She had broken it so she moved onto the next room. It was time for bed time. SO she went to the baby bear's bed and fell asleep straight away. She did not want to try the other ones.





Finally when the three bears came home they were growling they checked the porridge in the kitchen then they went to the living room. When they checked their rooms they were growling because they had seen goldilocks in their house. SO when they woke her up she ran away and never came back. THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jordan - I really enjoyed reading your version of Goldilocks and the three bears especially the way you described the bears as being kind. Goldilocks shouldn't have gone into their home without an invitation! Keep up the good work.
    Kind regards
    Mrs McMillan

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