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Tuesday 13 August 2019

Wonder writing


On a good afternoon people came over and the car was in there pool.So we couldn't be able to swim we tried fixing it but it was too heavy so this guy grabbed something and tried getting it out but they didn't .we quickly grabbed this strong string and attached it to the car and everyone pulled so hard it nearly came out so they pulled again and just a tiny bit nearly came out but it slid back in.
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  1. Migi Siō13 August 2019 at 11:45

    Thanks Jordan for your Wonder writing blog! How did you feel, when you saw the people trying to get the car out of the pool? How many people were pulling the rope? See if you're able to proof-read & edit your work. Check for capital letters, commas & fullstops. Keep going!

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