Narritive writing

On a cold freezing morning me and Jezer went to the beach for Jezer’s birthday. We were going to the beach going fishing we were going to catch shrimp squid.
But it was low tide we had to go down deep to catch some shrimp and squid it was about to rain in two hours. We had to move quick well not that quick we had two hours.
But when we tried to catch Squid and shrimp we could not get any we were searching for 1 hour and 30 mins. So we were thinking hard and Jezer thought of a great idea.
Jezer said “let’s go to the meat shop’’ So we had to walk there since we didn’t bring the car. So we had to Walk for ten minutes. So we both walked to the meat shop. When I arrived it was closed because it was 3pm and that’s when it finishes.