Narrative writing

When jezer and exodus went swimming in the pool they saw something secret that no one had known about it even the owners didn’t know.   They went in it and saw skeletons they got scared. Once they saw them they knew it was dangerous but they still wanted to explore it more. Because they saw more animals but the most things that were there were skeletons. But when they got deeper they heard something. Suddenly The skeletons turned into real life. But lucky when they were in school they remembered There swimming lessons. But they had secret talents. Jezer had Super speed and exodus had super strength When they tried to go back. They heard a big bang when they saw the whole skeletons Chasing Them down. jezer swam away and turned into a mermaid.  When exodus looked back he looked confused because he didn’t know that he would turn into a mermaid. Then exodus punched the skeletons Then more came their way, 1,0000 skeletons came rushing in. When exodus killed half of the skeletons His hands were tired. So he ran away and went to go tell the owners. But if the skeletons go in the sun they will die. Then the owners called the cops and so they had to shut the pool for a week. When a week went by. the pool opened and jezer and exodus explained what happened down there. So they went down there and saw nothing at the moment when they got deeper there was more.  They looked furious and sad at the same time because they lost some of their people. Then they were angry and they rushed to the cops and they nearly died but they didn’t. When the cops came out they were hurt there was blood all over them. Then the pool was full of red blood. So people had to go in the cold freezing pool. People were so angry they never went there again when the owners cleaned the pool out they blocked the secret passageway. When people came back they were happy but they felt scared because the skeletons. But when heaps of water came to the secret passageway then it broke. Because people wanted to explore it so exodus and jezer explored every single night because they weren't scared anymore. This guy popped out of nowhere and said you only have three chances to get this gold crystal and he said here is a map. So he gave him the map and exodus and jezer followed it. When they were getting tired they had a little rest they needed help but they didn’t want to give up.  So they kept on going finally when they got there they saw the crystal. But when they went to go grab it and there hand got burnt. Then they saw a shovel so they threw the shovel to the crystal and they finally got it. They thought of the greatest idea. They got the shovel and dug a hole for a short cut so they dug the hole and ended up at the park. When they got out they went right back to the pools and heard a big bomb exploded.  They were so glad that they don’t have to go through something like that ever again. When they got to the pools they told the owners and they thanked the man that helped exodus and jezer save the people. They wouldn't have done without the person. But there was one more and jezer and exodus is power turned off because it was night time. But the owners pushed the skeletons into the pool and the skeletons was weak. So jezer exodus and the owners all went to go punch the skeleton. Then the skeletons died and jezer and exodus was unbelievable because that was a friend of theirs. They regretted it and they went home miserable they were sad for four days. Then they heard more skeletons when they looked outside they felt like it was fake. They didn’t want to punch the skeletons they thought it was there friends. As soon as they came inside their house there dad called. he said to lock all the windows doors because skeletons were next to there house.  So they did exactly what their dad said. So they did it and as soon as they went to close the doors a skeletons hand got stuck. They tried their hardest to close the door and then they did it. When it came to the evening the dad came and went to the back door and said open the door it’s your dad quickly before they come get me. So they opened the back door then closed it quickly. The dad had invisibility so the whole family had superpowers there mum had flying powers. Then mum came and she also had laser eyes. So she flies on the roof and lasers some of the skeletons then she went to the back door and knocked. Exodus opened the door and shut hard and he heard a crack he was scared because the skeletons were hitting the door. So they had to hold the door just in case the door breaks so. This was there intense moment in there life this was the scariest thing in there life. They were so scared because there was a big boss and tons of skeletons. There was so much they didn’t know how much there was.